Assignment Four – The critical review – rework

This is the reworked version of this assignment for assessment, following feedback and reflection.

Initial review of my essay suggested that although there was no need for any amendments. In my formal feedback Russell made one point and as time allowed I did slightly alter the essay.

One general point I would make is for you to provide more evidence of the way social media, in particular, has altered perception of the female image – is there any evidence to show that contemporary female photographers have found a wider audience though say, Instagram and influenced informal or commercial photography (for example in fashion)?

Original Essay    Tutor Feedback and Response

Reworked critical essay